ניסיתי לשפר את OLD GREEN WOMAN.......
תגידו את דעתכם. מה יותר טוב? מה יותר יפה..?
הערות,הארות.......
On a place, all the lasts try to stand still
And listen to the wild voices from the Otrancic place
Times goes by, and another child is arrived
Some will say he's the proof of their love
But other children laughing at him 'cause he is not like everyone.
And the boy, yes, he grew
Into a place that can't stand that he's there
Every night he tries to figure one part of himself.
No one, no where can teach him how to laugh
Every morning he finds new imagine, telling someone.
In the nights, covers his face with another piece of a fading sun.
One day he'll escaped from his own place
On his way, the wind will tell him some secrets
But the man, he will consider it dead.
Oh oh
Standing in front the soul, heart of god
Throwing on me glowing stars
Asking from me to be his only one
But it's only imagines, one girl said.
Now he arrived to Otrancic place
All around is covered bright blue
People are dancing in the grass
Each of them is a different view.
Oh oh I knew there are others…
When the sun stood in the half way down to the sea
He blinked for so long his eyes to a woman that he couldn't see clearly
And The Only thing he could see- green stain and yellow-gray smile staring at him.
Turning around in Otrancic place and same woman follow you
Turning around in Otrancic place and same woman asking for you x2
Steal their souls and run to Barry them under your bed
That's what the old green woman told you, when the sun drowned in the sea.
The souls can make you unhappy, if you take it from sad men
You whispered the old lady in her ear-
I took it from one baby that cried all the day.
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24-02-2006, 00:10
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