30-04-2009, 20:19
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חבר מתאריך: 03.05.08
הודעות: 22
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Hey Atzlan...
I like where you are going with the hot air baloon...but a few comments:
1. the environment is not working for me...it looks too grainy and photoshoped.
2. the reflection on the baloon....what is that? I dont think that hot air baloons are that reflective.
3.When You show the closeup of the , the part where it connects to the basket looks bad. It is very polygonal, and the hinges just dont connect to anything. Be smart about what you show the viewers.
The second project still looks very cg.
You have dry grass, very green plants...super saturated sky...The ground pis very smooth... It needs a lot of work. Out of the two the baloon is a lot more interesting and looks better.
~Ilan
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